I’ve put a new revision of the paper QML: Quantum data and control on my website, available here. This is a complete rewrite of the old version (available here), and is based on the latest version of QML as found in my thesis, and implemented in my QML compiler. It contains a few small fixes not found in my thesis (mostly typos, and one extra diagram), and develops the idea of compositionality more fully (this section is still under revision). More to follow soon. Please feel free to email me with any comments on the draft.